From c46c0622dbe53885cc732263d06a91f6be187735 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Geoffrey Challen <challen@buffalo.edu>
Date: Sat, 27 Dec 2014 02:26:28 -0600
Subject: [PATCH] New.

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 introduction.tex | 26 +++++++++++++-------------
 paper.tex        |  8 +++++---
 2 files changed, 18 insertions(+), 16 deletions(-)

diff --git a/introduction.tex b/introduction.tex
index a64b885..30d9499 100644
--- a/introduction.tex
+++ b/introduction.tex
@@ -3,9 +3,9 @@
 Measuring app energy consumption\footnote{\small To avoid confusion between
 app and energy usage, we use \textit{consumption} exclusively when referring
 to energy usage and \textit{usage} exclusively when referring to user
-interaction with apps.} on mobile devices is close to being a solved problem,
-due to the great strides made in both generating and validating energy models
-that can deliver accurate runtime energy consumption
+interaction with apps.} on mobile devices is nearly a solved problem, due to
+great strides made in both generating and validating energy models that
+deliver accurate runtime energy consumption
 estimates~\cite{mansdi,vedge-nsdi13,pathak2011,pathak2012,yoon} and in
 accurately attributing energy consumption, even for asynchronous and shared
 resources~\cite{cinder-eurosys11,osdi08-quanto}. Accurate energy models bring
@@ -29,9 +29,9 @@ including:
 
 \end{itemize}
 
-Unifying all of these questions is one missing component: a measure of
-app \textit{value}, which can be used alone or combined with
-energy consumption to compute energy \textit{efficiency}:
+Unifying all of these questions is one missing component: a measure of app
+\textit{value}, which can be used alone or combined with energy consumption
+to compute energy \textit{efficiency}:
 %
 \[\frac{value}{energy} \]
 %
@@ -39,14 +39,14 @@ Armed with a measure of value we can return to the difficult questions posed
 above. By computing efficiency users can perform apples-to-apples comparisons
 of apps in order to evaluate two video conferencing tools, web browsers, or
 email clients. Developers can determine whether a new feature delivers value
-more or less efficiently than the rest of their app and understand better the
+more or less efficiently than the rest of their app and better understand the
 differences in energy consumption across different users. Measuring value
-allows a rigorous definition of an \textit{energy virus} as an app that delivers little
-or no value per joule, and for systems to reward efficient apps by
-prioritizing limited resources based on app value or energy efficiency. After
-all the progress we have made in computing the denominator---energy
-consumption---we believe that the search for the missing numerator is the
-most important open challenge in energy management.
+allows a rigorous definition of an \textit{energy virus} as an app that
+delivers little or no value per joule, and for systems to reward efficient
+apps by prioritizing limited resources based on app value or energy
+efficiency. After all the progress we have made in computing the
+denominator---energy consumption---we believe that the search for the missing
+numerator is the most important open challenge in energy management.
 
 Developing such a measure, however, is difficult. To be effective it must
 work across almost the entire spectrum of smartphone apps, which represent an
diff --git a/paper.tex b/paper.tex
index 10a6b53..247de38 100644
--- a/paper.tex
+++ b/paper.tex
@@ -4,6 +4,7 @@
 \def\thetitle{The Missing Numerator: Toward a Value Measure for Smartphone
 Apps}
 \def\theauthors{Anudipa Maiti and Geoffrey Challen}
+\def\theemails{\{anudipam,challen\}@buffalo.edu}
 
 \ifdefined\isdraft
   \usepackage{draftwatermark}
@@ -51,9 +52,10 @@ Apps}
 
 \author{
 \alignauthor
-Anudipa Maiti and Geoffrey Challen\\
-\affaddr{University at Buffalo}\\
-\email{\{anudipam,challen\}@buffalo.edu}
+\theauthors\\[0.05in]
+\affaddr{Department of Computer Science and Engineering}\\
+\affaddr{University at Buffalo}\\[0.05in]
+\email{\theemails}
 }
 
 
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